Angel

Dec. 1st, 2007 01:50 am
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Title: Angel
Author: lesyeuxverts
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Severus/Lily
Prompt: snow angels (thanks to [insanejournal.com profile] angela_snape and [insanejournal.com profile] gin_tonic)
Warnings: DH spoilers
Disclaimer: Not mine.
AN: Written for [insanejournal.com profile] adventdrabbles, day 1



Every year, Severus kept his promise on the first day of advent. He had a debt to pay and a love to live.

They had lain side by side in the snow, making angel-wings with their arms. Lily's hair had been her halo, and she'd smelled of gingerbread and toffee, spice and sweet.

Bells rang out through the churchyard, and he knelt until his bones were sore.

Stiff and weary, he lay on the ground over Lily's grave and made the image of an angel in the snow. His link to her, his link to heaven – his promise was fulfilled.

Date: 2007-12-01 06:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angela_snape.insanejournal.com
Aw, I really, really like this! So glad my prompt inspired you!!

Date: 2007-12-02 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com
Thanks - I'm so glad you liked it, and I'm so grateful for the prompts! It's making it so much easier than last year. :)

Date: 2007-12-02 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angela_snape.insanejournal.com
prompts are definitely the way to go ... so far Ali's are kicking my muse into gear - without them, I'd probably ask my f-list for help (or not do them)

Date: 2007-12-01 09:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] septentrion1970.insanejournal.com
It's so sweet. I'm melting.

Date: 2007-12-02 08:04 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-12-01 10:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gingertart50.insanejournal.com
Oh! *whimpers* so lovely and so sad.....

Date: 2007-12-02 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com
*hugs* Thanks, hon!

Date: 2007-12-01 12:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shiv5468.insanejournal.com
SNiffles.

Poor thing.

Date: 2007-12-02 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com
Poor Severus ... he's gotten it so bad in canon, and then I decide to torture him further. :(

Must stop. Now soon eventually ...

Date: 2007-12-01 03:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Oh, darling. How sweet and heartbreaking. *hugs*

Date: 2007-12-02 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com
*hugs* Thanks so much, hon!

Date: 2007-12-01 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firefly124.insanejournal.com
That was lovely. So sweetly sad.

Date: 2007-12-02 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com
Thanks so much!

Date: 2007-12-01 05:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sdk
awwwww so sweet and sad! just lovely, Lvy.

Date: 2007-12-02 08:00 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-12-01 05:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cblue9.insanejournal.com
Severus childhood memory is adorable! As is his promise!
Lovely, sweets!

Date: 2007-12-02 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com
Thanks so much!

Date: 2007-12-01 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sweetmelodykiss.insanejournal.com
Aww, so sweet! Poor Severus.

Date: 2007-12-02 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com
Thanks - glad you liked it! :)

Date: 2007-12-02 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dani_meows.insanejournal.com
So sad so sweet! *sniffles*

Date: 2007-12-02 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2007-12-05 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unbroken_halo.insanejournal.com
Awww *wails* As much as I love Severus with Harry and as much as I loved being right about Severus loving Lily, this is so heartbreaking. Excellent but heartbreaking. He deserved so much more.

Date: 2007-12-06 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com
Awww ... *hugs* Thanks, hon ... I'm glad you liked it, even if it was a bit too sad. I'm sure we'll make it up to poor Sev in future drabbles. :D

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