Beta? Pretty pretty please? :)

[lesyeuxverts]

I need a concrit-y beta for my HD Hols fic ... more along the lines of substance than commas, if you know what I mean. Do the scenes flow well, should there be more of them, does everything make sense, should I completely axe this scene or that character or whatever?

It's obviously H/D ... I don't want to give away the kinks/squicks because that would be telling, but comment or e-mail me if you'd be willing to do it and then I'll try to warn you away. :)

ETA: Taken care of, thanks!

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[snapesgirl_62.insanejournal.com]

if no one has voluteered, my email is my username at yahoo dahtcomm

[lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com]

Oh, whoops - I should have gone back and edited my post to say that I had got it taken care of. But thanks so much for offering! *loves* <3